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Old 07-09-2015, 10:46 AM   #7
Mr. J
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N for liking nuts u ain't gettin props plus ur writing sucks, u sound queer
Faggit, it's clear u like heavy D, n exactly why u ain't findin love around here,

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this was the strongest bar you had, the rest didn't really land a punch imo
otherwise I may have missed it, the closer was decent as well...
this sounds like it's built for an actual battle you know what I mean?
either way keep it up yo...

U triumph? Never. Wit da uzi I'm all type a better
30 shot clip zip up his Whole Hood like designer sweaters
Get robbed for ya chains if u flauntin.. U aint squeezin heat
I'll have my Hispanic homie at ya Neck wit da Glock.. dats a Jesus Piece

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this was clean right here, I lol'd at the Jesus piece line
I thought that heavy weights pushing the max was dope too
the closer was nice as well..nice work


V/Cred, He came with the punches that landed
as for Bust he kind of lost me with some of his lines
he only had one line that stood out to me, so this went to the more quotable one
other then that, dope battle fella's
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