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Both deep both very well put together. Both perfect for the 4th of July weekend


Man this like comparing a apple and a orange
I love both



Here's where I made my decision
Send half of dr dogs poem was not as intriguing as the first half


I loved the topic material cuz I feel my poem is about the same as urs is content wise


But
Ur second half wasn't as good as ur first
Ur last line didn't leave me nodding in agreement
Zen was more concise
He had better structure in the sense it felt like it had a beginning. Middle and end

U kind of tapered
I prefer the non rhyming poems tho


Both were great
Will share both with ppl offline if yall don't mind


Kudos bros

But I got zen