Personally
ifyou put a shitty sentence together and make me read it twice to figure it out, I'm thinking less of your verse as a result
sometimes people are like "damn y'all need to read better my verse was clearly about XXXX YYYY"
then you open their battle again and realize they used about 10 words wrong and generally fucked themselves with their bad writing
If you put a comma in the wrong place idgaf
but sometimes the sentence makes sense in a way you didn't mean so you just shoot yourself in the foot
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Originally Posted by PancakeBrah
I'm going to start off on a tangent.
when I write, lately, I feel as if I begin by stringing together ambient ideas and concepts, then i realize I'm just typing the words coffee, tawdry, and autumn over and over and over, again, then I pass out dru-
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