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Old 07-07-2015, 10:58 AM   #3
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Im not thankful im my dads son
Im thankful im handsom


Lol loved ghat line for some reason. Maybe its the quick turn around. That almost smart ass type of feeling that line gives off. Rest of the verse is littered with lines like that. I love the stop and go short verse quick and to the point style you seem to have perfected. Honestly havent read to many that can write as well as you do in this formatt.

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