solid imagery, or rather should i say 'image-inducing storytelling', and, from a technical perspective,the "format" with which you present it seems to decisively be the 'way you want it to be', and is good. something i've been trying to work on.
making it easy where the rhymes should hit, etc.
the... girl puking in an alley garbage can...
i'm really glad you used this here(early)and it's difficult to describe why atm.
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