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Clutbuck · 07-06-2015, 03:01 PM

Great battle here, this is how I got it:

Sn00p:
i almost hope i lose. college has me looking at books for days...
i've got finals coming up. u look at ur tourney run & wish u COULD relate
& don't blame it on the tourney...
...u've been a shadow of ur former self WAAAY before u signed up
all ur drops are simple as fk & u don't have good hits
ur verse is such a light read, uh-oh stopped looking for book tips
u're broke than a muhfucker & not just a bit nerdy
if u're seen at the club w/ green, the netcees shirt must've shipped early

I wasn't so keen on the "down to the wire" line as pretty much all idiom ish, unless it's made into a personal, I've seen flipped a dozen times prior. The current event hit with uh-oh was cool, same with the green in the club which was fresh to boot. Solid verse, real consistent, closer didn't hit for me personally though here.

Muff had a lot of creativity going for him here and you can't fault that, dude is oozing bars at the minute on some retro shit!

This Lame is Trash. My crew? We say nay to Fags
Treat it like Cruis'n World. You better Pull off if you A Bitch Waving Flags
Nice w/ the iron. Fuck around n put a holeo Bitch
When these Two Arms Go Up? They'll put a Tshirt over ya Head on some Cornholio shit
I'm sick. That nc shirt shit got me feelin swell
Only time YOU'LL be wearing the lime is when I dump POUNDS of it on u to conceal the smell
Fuck this miscreant. Actin like his presence doing us alllll favors
Birch the Only Stripes you Earned are a Few Red Ones after doin Hard Labor
Upper Stratosphere. Your honestly not a cat I fear
Ur like that SpaceX launch
You Shoot for the Stars n Just Break Apart in the Atmosphere
I'm on bs?. Try me. Ur mom is meant 4 a shock
turn ya team into 13 ghosts. But ull be the only Jackal w/ his head in a Box

LOOOOOL Beavis and Butthead throwback was dope, wearing green was still cool but maybe didn't hit as hard as it came after sn00ps here and his was fresher in the mind having read it first? Still nice though, Red Stripe line was illy, SpaceX was solid too as well as the closer here. Muff brought it. You both brought it, guess I just found a likeness for Muffs originality and felt that overpowered that idiom line and Hush ish from sn00ps, that's literally all this came down to for me, who had the marginally weaker misses. Sucks to decide a vote like that but I guess Muff on consistency is what I'm actually leaning towards with the edge?

I'm going with Muff here by a nut hair on a freshly shaven Veritas. Close call. Good battle brethren!

07-06-2015, 03:01 PM	#4
Clutbuck Battle Rap's Married Man Join Date: May 2015 Location: Crumpetville, England Posts: 389 Battle Record: 2-0 Champed - Gorilla Writing league Rep Power: 3513501	Great battle here, this is how I got it: Sn00p: i almost hope i lose. college has me looking at books for days... i've got finals coming up. u look at ur tourney run & wish u COULD relate & don't blame it on the tourney... ...u've been a shadow of ur former self WAAAY before u signed up all ur drops are simple as fk & u don't have good hits ur verse is such a light read, uh-oh stopped looking for book tips u're broke than a muhfucker & not just a bit nerdy if u're seen at the club w/ green, the netcees shirt must've shipped early I wasn't so keen on the "down to the wire" line as pretty much all idiom ish, unless it's made into a personal, I've seen flipped a dozen times prior. The current event hit with uh-oh was cool, same with the green in the club which was fresh to boot. Solid verse, real consistent, closer didn't hit for me personally though here. Muff had a lot of creativity going for him here and you can't fault that, dude is oozing bars at the minute on some retro shit! This Lame is Trash. My crew? We say nay to Fags Treat it like Cruis'n World. You better Pull off if you A Bitch Waving Flags Nice w/ the iron. Fuck around n put a holeo Bitch When these Two Arms Go Up? They'll put a Tshirt over ya Head on some Cornholio shit I'm sick. That nc shirt shit got me feelin swell Only time YOU'LL be wearing the lime is when I dump POUNDS of it on u to conceal the smell Fuck this miscreant. Actin like his presence doing us alllll favors Birch the Only Stripes you Earned are a Few Red Ones after doin Hard Labor Upper Stratosphere. Your honestly not a cat I fear Ur like that SpaceX launch You Shoot for the Stars n Just Break Apart in the Atmosphere I'm on bs?. Try me. Ur mom is meant 4 a shock turn ya team into 13 ghosts. But ull be the only Jackal w/ his head in a Box LOOOOOL Beavis and Butthead throwback was dope, wearing green was still cool but maybe didn't hit as hard as it came after sn00ps here and his was fresher in the mind having read it first? Still nice though, Red Stripe line was illy, SpaceX was solid too as well as the closer here. Muff brought it. You both brought it, guess I just found a likeness for Muffs originality and felt that overpowered that idiom line and Hush ish from sn00ps, that's literally all this came down to for me, who had the marginally weaker misses. Sucks to decide a vote like that but I guess Muff on consistency is what I'm actually leaning towards with the edge? I'm going with Muff here by a nut hair on a freshly shaven Veritas. Close call. Good battle brethren!