Ol so i felt like wanderer just dropped playe shit thays done over and pver
Woty lotto(sandlot, lot line) dope lines but i feel like ive seen them a thousand times
So they loose that wow factor for me. Dug the opener and i thought the rooney line was your best line
Lotto
Felt like you had more to offer. Felt like to attempted for a more personal approach( the suicide squad lines) thought you could of took this easily if you would of worked that concept more. You took punches but didnt go in for the kill
Overall
I think i got lotto for a more l hard hitting piece. Wanderer fell short for me with the misses. Thanks for the read fellas
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