[fraze]

Originally Posted by Wanderer

With every line you loose, bitch you ain't fit to shine my shoes
these thick girls gimme wood when on top o'me.. no chick's ever Pined over you
smooth flow but the wording is off to me. why not something like 'no chick wood pine over you'
Girls hit up my crib & it's hearts for stars when wanderer slay
If I'm seeing chicks round Lot's they just park their cars and walk away
Cool concept but I think this could have been harsher.
You're boring & lame. Believing you stun is a crime
ya style ain't really newbie, you just get mistaken for one all the time
didn't like the word choice, if the flip is on new you could have used fresh instead of stun for a better tie in
I'll beach yo ass. if we fought shit could get crucial with the hands, stop
Im a big dog in this yard, you'll see when I put you in the Sandlot
this was nice to me
When the pressures on you choke so imm'a just squeeze gats
kinda like Rooney at international level, ya gonna do nothing except receive caps
I get it but not really feeling this line. concept is decent but wording is boring to me

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

wanderer
ya past ya prime, waste of my time see me I'm on a spree g
your just an elder wand, n you'll need the magic powers it contains just to beat me
the concept is there but magic wand for him is kinda played. I don't mind dope flips on played concepts but this isnt quite there
so flee b, cus u need a crew to improve cus mutha Fucka u ain't frightening
only be dope if you turned to hush... n did exactly that n shut up n give up writing
another cool concept but hampered by bad wording. if you read that aloud it sounds really awkward.
you ain't never getting girls fam, ya skills not showing as of late
cus wanders off.. ironic bitches also do this silently strolling away from you on dates
simple to me and not that harsh. funny to me this is essentially the same bar wanderer used against you about girls leaving lot
m.sho, muff, hush cred n greed are dope I can't argue with that fact
so you joined together for suicide.. I hope your the first to go n then the rest bitch out the pact
creative crew personal. liked this
I'm back, hitting certain spots that hurt, but like u urs are very poor
my personal account is on point... while ur lucky if you even have a dollar when it comes to yours
meh, I'll pass on this

close battle. both had similar caliber verses, with wanderer having better wording, while lotto came with a lot of creative concepts. this one really comes down to style preference because both had similar hit's and misses. they even both did similar nameplay flip bars. I think overall wanderer was a little more consistent, so I'm going with him.

Vote: Wanderer