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Dr.Dog - I enjoy the cadence in your poem. Easy to follow yet the level of the way you write reads smoothly as you define blues. Nice use of the topic to truly catch the atmosphere with words as well. Dope shit.

Vulgar - I can see similarities between the style your topicals to this poem. The rich vocabulary mixed with excellent descriptions creates excellent imagery and it's easy for me to paint a picture in my head. The only thing I'd say I'd enjoy more is if you paid more attention to punctuation as certain parts of your verse pays notice to it while others don't. The rather sporadic stanza-build isn't very nice to look at but it makes sense while reading as it creates natural pauses in between each ''set-up'' if you will, I like that. Overall you did a great job with this and I enjoyed the read, the only thing I had an issue with was that it was rather loose regarding the topic given even in the abstract sense.

Witty - Cool. Don't really got anything more to add or take away from your submission. It just is what it is and I like it, and I'd definitely enjoy to read a polished or refined version of this as it seems like you ain't really happy with the product here. That said; I'd still like to see a lot better punctuation because it was close to non-existent. I know I've been putting people down for this in topicals and that's kind of on the edge or unfair to do, but in poetry I see absolutely nothing wrong with it as I feel it's supposed to be a more refined language and beauty unless it plays a vital role to the poem as a whole which it didn't in this, and I felt you lost a lot of points here. Otherwise it was cool, easy to follow and a decent showing in this category.

Vote - I can see what Vulgar is going for and the poem was dope as fuck that I enjoyed a lot but I still think it's rather loose regarding the topic. Witty's verse was rather cool and I enjoyed the end but the punctuation was fucked which I didn't enjoy as much. I felt Dr.Dog delivered everytyhing in this; punctuation though the grammar could have been better but that goes for everyone, dope cadence, short and to the point + nailing the topic imo.

Ye, my vote goes to Dr.Dog for consistency throughout and a solid showing. Dope battle.