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Old 07-05-2015, 09:39 AM   #9
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Okay gonna attempt to break this battle down...to me Dr dog had the verse more closely significant to a verse in this battle although his verse was shorter than the others it had color running throughout the piece while the others seemed to lack any meaning..as for witty and vulgari felt v was trying a bit too hard to find any reason to his verse there were also times he had defitions that didn't make sense as for witty I'm unsure what u didn't like about your verse it was a decent attempt at a verse I'm not saying u wre perfect but you used ideas that were well put together just didn't have enough to take the win


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