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Old 07-05-2015, 09:28 AM   #7
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I felt similar to inno and thought objective was a bit vague and I couldnt put a finger on the significance of objectives topic and how it tied into the pic provided as for graze he came basic and his verse could have used a push in any direction and I think he would have taken this battle easily

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I think fraze's generic verse was still enough to take the win but next week am going to make sure he puts a little effort to make his verse more simple so that its more enjoyable to read whereas I hope objective uses the topic more indignantly so that it puts a clear idea running through the entire piece

Yeah so vote, fraze
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