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Old 07-05-2015, 08:41 AM   #11
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I'll wink at u thru the scope. keep my gun tight, loadin
Have 2 choices. sleep with one eye open or get put to sleep with one eye open.
Ya not even a factor, burn ya insides deep to ur matter
Bring heat to ya abs & see a core meltdown that'd rival Fukushima's reactor.
Ya bitch threw the D back at u cuz the size hardly enjoyable.
She saw a mushroom tip and closed the box faster than Super Mario tutorials.

those first three were dope back to back, swinging dance floor shit was okay but with it coming after those first six it just felt a little flat in comparison I guess? I liked it, don't get the Paulie Shore line tbh that went right over my head but rest of the verse was solid

Ya girls a ho. Trust I get my Share of pussy when I flex the D
Dog. I’ve been Insider Trading Busts for so long, you’d think I worked for the SEC
You’ve BEEN confused – Please spare us, the acting is useless
I see Transamerica as my retirement pay. You see it as a national movement
His whole approach is disarrayed. Nothing hits, this kid’s a dud
This Bitch has Given Birth to so many styles, it seems the Artemis is in his blood

I didn't like the Identify/accident ish, it seems like wordplay for wordplays sake without really being relevant to the punch (for me at least). Transamerica was nice and fresh to me, pediatrician line was good too, almost quoted that one as well. All in all I had this one pretty evenly matched,I'm just leaning slightly towards Infiltration here for some reason. His wording is nice to me, loved the opener.

I'm giving it to Inf.
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