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Old 07-05-2015, 06:15 AM   #12
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Fraze

Opener is creative af just felt like u overdid it
Don't nobody say this bruh's in real life, cool attempt on brazil tho
Mascara Eye lash was ok haven't been around long enuff to say eyelash is played but mascara def is..the way u tied it in tho I kinda liked it
Charr was nice
Neurotic works depending on pronunciation, ur wp'n the fuck out these lines lol
Closer made me laugh..

Tic

Opener was a nice personal
Didn't really like infantile that much
Had to google Latin1, turned out bar was pretty cool

Andesite is a cool wp just felt it coulda been referenced better, coulda been fire
Kids height was funny as hell,
Closer was ooook

Well, I thought graze came ok a lil too much wp per bar but still a decent read, n tic also had a pretty good verse n I just felt he was more personal n had better balance overall.. Again depending on preference is hue it goes down n got tic edging it..cook read guys
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