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Old 07-04-2015, 06:15 AM   #8
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Alpo got this easily with the donkey and adam garden lines, they were both solid but couldve been better with cleaner wording. Ribbit obviously is a noob and had nothing at all but don't give up @ribbit go to the archives and read how the greats did it, u got to incorporate metaphors, wordplays, nameplays, misdirections, personals etc, there have to be a concept from which u build upon to diss ur opponent, not just by rhyming words randomly. Keep battling.
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