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Old 07-02-2015, 03:33 PM   #2
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When I first read this I didn't really pay attention, I just skimmed it
but when I placed my vote I went back and read both of your pieces
I peeped the votes & I was like whaaaaaat they didn't see what he did
and that's the cool thing about your pieces you weave them so well
you based your picture around a story that built up to the finding of the mask
I see where you could have put the picture but at the end is dope too..
as I read I felt grasped by the story like it was a short story...


I couldn't help but think of this after reading the piece a few times though..




but this was dope regardless...may the OM Gods bless you with feed
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