I hope he reach so I can choke this geek.
Only time his name highlighted in the league is if he didn't vote that week.
old school feel... I fuck wit it
Back in the day I bet youda done anything to dick suck eminem.
'Now days y'all done forgot about dre'...
cause he never did shit worth remembering.
ok, not worded well enough wit that easy a concept though
I won't name names but these lames are a problem here.
Andreas at Fault for opening us up to these flamers at bottom tier.
cool. the wordplay solid, thought the end of the line coulda been tougher
Someone send this kid help? even then this bitch fail.
You'll never Wendy, I'll smash ur head on the ground till the blood look like pigtails.
ehhhh... nah
Text is ya life. Too bad u got no real skill.
lose a battle n it feel real...
Then u flushing the toilet to drown the sound of the tears like chill Phil.
I'm missin the reference here, sorry. flow on point though
No pussy getting fgt, u better call me sir.
If a girl says amen, its to thank god u didn't come talk to her
thought my version a cpl wks back was better... not fresh, but not terrible
Fuck this bitch and his charts n graphs.
Ill put hands on him till his only daily activity is arts n crafts.
this one just didn't have enough complexity or sting
vs.
My hands’ll leave bruises & knots, when let loose they’ll drop this flake,
this battle you’ll find ya’ mark & have a few to choose from, all over ya’ face.
cool tie in here... nice start
Ya’ niggas get NO pussy, so it’s Bars over Bitches & trust, I respect it dude,
What I can’t respect is;
This pussy strikin bars over bitches heads cuz they won’t have sex w/ you.
this isn't a personal right? maybe I'm missin somethin but not really feelin it
But we already know you a lame fucknigga, but this nigga learnin today,
When it comes to fire,
I’ma give’em that crash course that’ll have Paul Walker turn in his grave.
paul walker my nigga? nah... tired concept & wording sucked here
er’body knows I got them gun bars, that’ll easily leave ya jaw in sections,
He could spit every gun bar there is & still not manage to draw attention.
ok... not the best concept but execution was there
Ya flawed w/ text man. I won’t get TOUCHED by you, so fuck battle scars,
These shot’s to ya’ chest’ll havem harlem shakin worse then Knucks avatar.
decent
You’re WACK w/ bars. Why you return when you just blow w/ the pen?
IDK what got Artery surface, but cut all of yours and never show up again.
whaaaaat? this is dope man
Pussy & sorry to tell ya’, Ya girls cheatin’ & don’t wanna stop the games,
Son; whenever Dre beats, she gives you an earful about the chronic pains.
solid finish... had a Dre Beats concept for you I scrapped, this was better
okay... Amen can actually write some quality bars I guess
Marks was nice, dre beats good, Artery surface was fire man that was the one. lotb.
Artificial had the opener... I liked that... a couple other that were cool but not enough here
Nice verse dreMen. Put this level of effort (or more) into your verses from now on & you good
V/ Amen
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