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I'm not sure if the dates will connect to everything as our story progresses...
as you may know I have recently dropped a piece called "I'm a National Treasure"
our stage is set, I welcome you to a very fun ride down memory lane as I capture it
since this has gone unnoticed as of late I figured we'd need a recap on all that has taken place...




Qwarterly Analysis TOPIC:EMOTION

We start at the beginning, the very beginning, where I as usual...
am having fun, where inactivity runs rampant, with ego's galore
so why not cause a little disruption while I make my return...
in fact this took up most of my time sidelining me from the Martyrs league..
so thanks dick!

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in a pair of trainers, all about that base like an umpire
If Life is a bitch, she probably has a gun by her...
sittin' next to Death with a Molotov cocktail to unwind her
came out with my ass this time around like Sun's tired
left the OM too long I thought you fuckheads could carry it..
got me pulling back in with a Pegasus pulling my chariot
the only nice thing about you, is the suit you'll get buried in
shout out @dead man for lending you your style...*but on your frame it looks hilllllarious*


I'm so cunning, I'm so iiillllllll
the most dangerous game makes for a wonderful kill
since you riding my coattails I'll put a pump in those heels

you in the background with a camera catchin' the social unrest
taking a week to write a line this came up 'cause my connect had success
in deliverin' me the wax that got me spinnin' like a DJ
a Joker in the deck with you detectives hitting replay...
you want to play Batman because Arkham Knight is currently out
so if this monkey is still on my back I guess the Circus is in town
they wanted 12 so I'm guessing there's a judge & jury around
got your 2 cents in the news so I guess I have to deliver Qwarterlys now
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No
This quote from deadman was sent the morning after my piece
how did I take this, I was unsure so I waited a majority of the day for a reply
when nothing was said, I figured he was going to try something out of character
at which point I crafted a story surrounding all that was going to come



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The satellite dish emits hope on a candlelit wish..
I'm frantic, demanded a kick with a non canceling clip
unedited, a sedative seducing the rage, managing it
threatened with a sentence, isn't that tragically sick
This was written the night dead man so sternly told me no...
this is when the Qwarterly's begin, as you may notice the last line..
it was more focused on how killing someone get's you time in prison
bars & what not blah blah blah...but then..

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Originally Posted by dead man View Post
looking back, i can't believe you would have the nerve to even say that in jest you fucking ingrate.

your "style" now is like a poor man's imitation of the way i was writing 6 years ago.

back to the drawing board big guy. my username was the most interesting thing you've written this year.

dickhead.
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what a twisted dimension, a sense of perfection...
this is where insanity lives, the passionate dig as if..
unwrapping a gift, this is where love & vanity kiss
lusting over inanimate shit, the map to sadness & risk
Family's strive to be perfect, at least that's what I garnered...
insanity is built on routine as family's continue living life well
but to be insane is to also be aggressive, see conspiracy where none is
I'm in the house, the OM, the mind...


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a maze! how elaborate it gets as it shatters when hit
with just enough room where only disaster can sit
matter is split, & janitors give their answers to quit
the same feeling that 'on a silver platter' depicts...
head shots come quicker than the camera can flick
if your manners are shit you'll end up how Saturn is...(old Genesis system yo)
I'm erratic, I'm quick, Doc Holiday on a cancerous trip
swifter than a Samurais tip, with a hand on the hip
a standoff with tits but I'm like Gandalf with this
you have the courage I'll need to read that and shit
he began deflecting from my question regarding Qwarterly's
enough room where disaster can sit, this is a clever view on waiting for a diagnosis
matter is split leads up to the head shot section, this comes into play again later
ending a majority of Qwarterly #1 the second takes place a day later

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As change hits rock bottom, I pick up & dial in..
all smiles friend, but that's where the profile ends
I retort in a 'trial' sense, anger found in my wild grin.
this was done on the 26th describing the things to come...
finally the 27th rolls around and here comes dead man on the wrong side of the rose bed

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Originally Posted by dead man View Post
you're unoriginal and corny.

half your posts are long retired gifs and google image reaction pictures.

emotions on deck. so much emotion. this is why i have some semblance of a personality. you're a bottom feeder, worth less to this website than a worm in Baron's colon.

fuck your face with a crescent wrench faggot.

here's another bump. you're welcome.
this was all taking place on the 27th therefore I sat back and watched it all unfold...
on the 28th I decided to make the thread to help unravel this tangled web we weave..


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@dead man

you have an issue you want to solve. you can do it here like a grown person & stop flooding my OM's with your emotions breh.
I made a thread to talk it out politely, deadman was also polite :)

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what do you want to talk about bro?
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I even spelled it out for you, NEWSFLASH the best distraction
this is just a blurred view so the truth is dissected in fractions
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Originally Posted by ill nik-A View Post
Om has become a political stance by the same whack style

Pretty words that sound cute when u say it, with little to nothing depth... It's the same circle jerk of mediocrity that swear they're that good
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Originally Posted by Innovator View Post
Lol from the post ive seen isnt he pretentious douche

Hey man its just a joke dont hate on my oms bro
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I would have left it alone but he's the one on the offense.

you want to talk do it here...you want to write...you know where I am
@dead man what really pains you bruh?
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Ayo but from an unbiased perspective Mr j seem like the whiney bitch right now.
a majority of the quotes above came from the 28th of course the Qwarterly is still from the 26th...

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I've crafted a well executed plan with graphics
I even left a picture to match it to my specific enhancements
you people act as if art is merely meant for a craftsman
this is instinctive its only perfect when it's meant to happen!
because honestly what's living without a little senseless action?!
?
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you're a clown

i respond to an offhand remark you make about me, unprovoked, in a horrible OM and this is the result. i thought you'd be happy to bring some activity into one of your threads.

you know how i know you lose? cause muff is negging me for being such a mean bully

glad you thought this was necessary and i hope we can still be friends

get the fuck out of my office
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I guess you haven't seen my avy as of late though...

you want to talk bout ~12~ when I used to take writing slightly more serious than I do now, we could talk 'Q' but that only happened after Billy thought I was trying to be him, after I dismissed him I switched the name because I was tired of being made out as him..

but now you want to talk 'J'...'J' a moniker not to be taken seriously (obviously) who would rather make fun of what has become and point out the flaws & laugh at it.

and you get offended over that?

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my name isn't in the system, my card was a lie since..
early '96, I was a gambler, manager of 5 kids..
my wife's sick..she became a burden & my mind split
but all of that is private
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pardon me i haven't been following your little identity crisis

is your next moniker going to have a backbone?

@ill nik-A

topic of your choosing

leggo
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isn't that pathetic of fantastic? I never understood the facet...
but you need to describe the horror & the mess you captured!
I CARVED A SMILE IN THEIR FACES BEFORE I LEFT THE MANSION!
using the bullet hole in the forehead for a lipstick styled fashion
and even phoned it in on how it was perfectly mastered...
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Here we go

I'll drop the topic once it's set

The word of wisdom always knows what's up
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Topic: EMOTIONS
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well this thread is over

thanks
@Mr. J

start a new one if you want
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The third, is basically the second & first..
peep, pay attention, observe as its set in reverse
without proper elements we question the work
the ignition is turned, so the engine should purr
if we keep it gassed we roll at an exceptional swerve

keeping our mind on whats ahead, all that's left for concern...
is the view..this is where the vision is blurred
feeling like Vincent Vega hitting a curb

*spoiler alert* the issue is hidden, submerged
so I crafted a story with a message to learn..
no one pays attention, until you displaying it first
the second it works, is when the tension occurs
to make sure it follows through we reflected the worst

don't think I was ever being passive aggressive ya nerd!
I took action when you questioned my turn..
you question the route, when your quest is preferred
but I proved my point when the questions deterred
the subtleties are bountiful & somewhat superb!
I'm not a monster, I'm just ahead of the curve
the third is a connection to the third, more like a getaway so to speak..
full of fun references to the situation at hand while reflecting Qwarterly 1 & 2
my favorite moment is bold due to looking back on the head shot...
ahhh how subtle everything can be...

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It's like I have this on lock with a homing beacon
and as of late, movement seemed only recent..(OM activity)
watchful eyes got me lurking, exposing secrets (\/)
Pandora's box opened with a holy sequence (Qwarterly #3)
blade quarter of the way in as Shinobi creeps in (referring to Q #1)
with their chest out now, like they holding weed in
I control the outcome as I masterfully mold a defense.(Qwarterly #2)
The OM is a spot to lay my head, I seen dead man lurking in the shadows
I'm sure he would have commented on the battle thread not being up...
but oh well....I guess I'm the only one that remembered this was going on..

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the earth is fractured as the eroding seeps in
a bed arose, I'm on my sadistic, lonely freak shit
all up in mother earth while the bones get sea sick
euphoria, hallucinations, YOU GOTTA SMOKE A BOWL TO SEE THIS
(shit) if the method was read correctly, you'd see how high
get haunted by your actions with your seat down like....
Jennifer Aniston, breaking character, better antonyms
this section is my favorite due to me having to go back and bring this together
I would have bumped everything, but it's much better this way I feel...
I just watched 'Cake' on Netflix so figured I'd make a reference about that as well
but the fun part of this section is the mother earth area...
the rain, meth & red, how high, chill in composure seat down..
yea this was a great exercise...thank you for all participants..
everyone that contributed to the Qwarterly & those still angered...

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Originally Posted by dead man View Post
shout out to ~12~ for showing us you can try super hard for a long time and still get no better

you're the jojo simmons of this shit

maybe you should hang it up until you find a new outlet for your fantasy life, BUB
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But ur better than this

I love u.
Stay up

Goddammit u can be a vindictive mfer if need b I see that.

But you saying you two aren't comparable makes me think deep down you think u two are comparabe

Don't get me wrong. Here's ur ego stroke.

I absolutely love what you do. Not only are you a technical genius but your capable of dropping the most poignant shit (i.e one liners n such )

Thing about Mr j is

HIs shit is NEVER technically perfect. But most of the time he says some shit that's really easy to identify w/ n it comes off as genuine. Like he just goes man.


Yall are on two opposite sides of the spectrum

I think ur better n I think he does too

But I bet u ur comments strike him ass odd too

Hence his replies of a jovial nature n he genuinely wishes u the best

Can I get a Amen
it's pretty funny you know, if he didn't continue on as he did...
the Qwarterly analysis wouldn't come to fruition...
No one pays attention unless you have the spot light on you
while it was all on dead man.....I made him a slave...



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