Bars I quoted from hush were solid.
rest were mild/wack to me. I thought that Clap line was booty as well. I even stated the Origin of that bar in which Muff dropped was trash/corny to me... But w/e. Everyone has their preference in style and that isn't mine per say.
your bars were sloppy and/or played @
Greed - as I stated in my vote.
The lisps references I've been seen done since like 2010 on Hush. Lotto shit, since like 2012. And the Living with his moms.
You made no attempt to be creative with those concepts and executed as basic as possible which to me, those concepts were delivered as bland as possible. I don't mind played concepts, in fact I always quote played ones if I like them and feel the writer was creative in his flip. However, you weren't. To me, HUSH posted up and I feel as if you just sat in front of a screen and off the top quick keyed that without effort or thought. That's what I got out of reading your verse.
Not trying to come off as a dick by any means either, just expression from and outside perspective, bro.