Buddah was entertaining, and I got into the xmen theme, but I think I would have done more with it more references and I think he fell off rhyme around the 3 quarters way. I did enjoy his story though and it is a difficult job to make a rhyme a story, as all topicalists know, I just think he could have gone more over the top with the xmen concept and also that concept isn;t realy abstract pertaining to the image.
Lars was quite tranceful to read, and it made my mind boggly. It seemed so simple but all put together so complicated, in so oarts the rymhing scheme fell off and then it was brought back 2 lines later which accomodated. The theme was masterful, maths, and a little bit of pondering life thrown in the end but not too much too take a side, nice, It reminded me of your piece about the evoultion of life a bit.
Baron owned this, his piece is hof worthy.
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