[Ronin]

Buddha, I really like this piece. It was incredible, it had it all really great story telling, some action n a little suspense with the ending which I liked. Prof X now knowing what he had to do since he took like. It was like telling the history of how we arrived to the picture. Had good rhyme scheme and flow n didn't really fall off anywhere. The imagery was great too. Once I started I was invested in the story n couldn't stop. I'm partial to xmen too soooo lol. I thought u had this in the bag for sure...

Then I read clusterfuck's piece. Wow. I like the concept of a parallel/alternate reality that coincides with our existence and that its based on math and constants. At first I was like ok he's doing a matrix type piece but it wasn't that at all, it was something unique and that's what I really likes about it. It was like u pealed back the veil to look at the mexhanics of the universe. The flow was seamless and the vocabulary used was crazy. Like Mr j said when I seen tapestry and the way u used it I was like "my nigga." Lol.

This was close and I was really pulling for buddah after reading his verse cause the xmen theme lol. But Lars's was just incredible. So...

Vote Lars

Sorry if my breakdown and vote sounds retarded but its hard to do on my phone.