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aight so my issue with razah here was it felt lifeless.
now that dont mean it wasnt good, or techincal
it was good, and it was technical
but it felt cookie cutter
rhyme patterns, topic, interprtation, what u said, how u said it
iunno b

this IS NOT a knock on u as a writer, never read anything from u before, and im not really a good judge of this anyway imho
BUT i am trying to look at ur verse vs his, if i was breaking this down in the open mic just as ur verse it would be easier, cuz alone as it stands there is nothing that I DID NOT like about it. it was cool
but against his.. after i read them both back to back
iunno man


one shines more
one has more luster for me
prolly personal preference but keeping it funky I knew mr j had the better verse like 2 lines in

IT FELT BETTER
does that make sense?
iunno

I had more shit typed up
but J had a more poetic feel, I related to what he was saying, it kept me going, almost on edge of my seat
like a good movie
raz was like a tv show type deal


iunno man

no disrespect to nobody
my first vote was better but the site killed it

so yea


V- mr j