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blade quarter of the way in as Shinobi creeps in
with their chest out now, like they holding weed in
I control the outcome as I masterfully mold a defense
the earth is fractured as the eroding seeps in
a bed arose, I'm on my sadistic, lonely freak shit
all up in mother earth while the bones get sea sick
euphoria, hallucinations, YOU GOTTA SMOKE A BOWL TO SEE THIS
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This whole section was flames my friend, rhymes were executed perfectly and your concepts were really impressive, that holy sequence/shinobi creeps in couplet was super super nice, all of it was really. Usually your rhymes can be a little off, but you showed with this piece you are capable of keeping them tight when you feel like it. Enjoying your recent spree, keep 'em coming!