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Old 06-30-2015, 07:04 AM   #3
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Originally Posted by Witty View Post
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=119129

Something - Nobody cares about your problems.

Great piece, worthy of this accolade imo.
yeah i cosign that

didnt much care for LOL in the middle of the two verses on first read, but on second read i took it to be almost a sarcastic flippant remark and him not actually laughing all, starting off the descent into a dark mania of morbid thoughts

pretty cool how it was executed and OM been dry as a bone recently for some reason

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