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Old 06-28-2015, 11:19 PM   #11
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Nikas whole verse minus the next to last bar was nice. Smooth read almost all the way thru with no lag or jumbled wording. Just a professional verse from a professional txt battler lol. Good shit

Opener was OK I thought I could've been smoother if u left mark out and just put Cuban. Rust line was OK, the him vs j hens line was OK, sharon stone would've been nice but it read like u added words in there just for the hell of it, teen habit OK n closer was just OK.

I got nik winning this with the smoother verse, cleaner punches/wording and consistency. Fraze had a bunch of OK punches but nothing stood out, he had a cpl misses too

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