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hey i liked this. slow depressing solid. you use some pretty hard rhymes tho. the whole bedroom heckled special etc, it all rhymes sonically even tho it aint like a perfect rhyme, but i feel you over emphasise them a little to make them sound like they rhyme better instead of just spitting it if that makes sense

also some words could be dropped, like my friends are dead DUDE, dude isn't needed. granted on paper it looks better cuz it rhymes with bedroom and heckled and shit, its two syllables, but you could just say some of my friends are dead, and im living out life in my bedroom.

but word minor tweaks and shit that comes from how its written to how you can spit it where it sounds like a comfortable free formed thought

but its solid BRO