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Originally Posted by iSpaz
First I'll catch you alone. Then that fuckin chrome'll have you lit.
But there's no need to Draw it out... when my plan always been 'a tac, tic'.
liked this. 'attack tic' is cool, but it suffers because you flipped the name with no explanation
Eagle eye. I'll send bullets flyin cause guns is what I still do.
So when I bang 10 Rounds.. it's just to prove I'll go the distance to kill you.
too simple.
Shittt I been dirty. On the roof wit 30.30s and real stealthy bitch.
So that means I take shots from afar.. nd I ain't talkin selfie sticks.
this was aight
Fuck you lame. We been in the game and improving in chunks.
Well everybody Cept tic.. we all just hope your entire being gets dumped.
cool concept. this could have been harsher in the punch. as worded its a little light
See where I'm from. Kids got guns and crack dealers try to con.
The last time you learned to Blast toys was gettin levels on ur pokemon.
haha i liked this, more pokebars.
Dude you're a fairy. Far from scary with ur crew lookin like some queens..
..Nigga you Kick it with more bitches than the US girls soccer team.
kinda straightforward and the diss relies on the setup, otherwise it would have been a complement. not a problem per se, but it makes it less harsh
You could get mad. I'll just stab straight into ur little chest.
Your whole family'll mourn.. so it's obvi how my Ripple Affect.
didnt set up a second meaning on ripple effect, otherwise this would have been dope
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Originally Posted by Tic
NC is full of queers like you, but you should stop cuz ya rep is thin
It's like each week ISpy a faggot and immediately hops into bed with him
meh. this is a disappointing bar from you
He loves Role Playing Games w/ dudes & findin a few fags to feel...
The way he takes it in the Button Switch - You'd think he was driving the new Batmobile
meh again. concept is there but something feels off in the wording
Dude is a bitch, so trust these punches are harmin ya
One uppercut is all I need to put Eye in the Sky like a fuckin astronomer
this is liked. nice
I'll Take You By Surprise and trust when the gat bucks, you'll lose
Call it my Eye Opener when I give the trigger a Tap on ya head like duck duck goose
wordy punch. i would have said 'when bullets tap ya head...' or something to keep the flow smooth. otherwise cool
Ya girl says ya short on top, she wants my enormous cock
So I Open'er Up, Fold it Back & stuff it alllll in...Office Storage box
not feeling this
You & ya man's is dead kid, cuz my range w/ the can is endless
So when it comes to ya Team, I'll Pick You Off 1 by 1 like Andy Pettite
aight
You'll never Bounce Back, so there's no way you'll win
2 choices: Either you Cuddyer sit out next round for making worse plays than him
little obscure for me. but the wp is there
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Eyespaz, you've been getting better every week. I see you working on the concepts and wording, and every verse is better than the one before. I liked selfie stick and blast toys. Cept tic and kick it with girls were close.
Tic, you didn't seem very motivated here and dropped a kinda mediocre verse (compared to previous work). I like eye in the sky and tap ya head. Few close bars, that I didn't like for sort of nitpicky reasons (so I won't count that too much against you).
Overrall Tic was slightly more consistent, but Spaz is getting close. Definitely can't fault anyone who votes the other way, cause I was impressed by some of the creativity you showed. But don't think it was quite enough to beat Tic.
Vote: Tic Tac