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Originally Posted by Knucklehead
U think I can't use gunbars? Bitch plz you ain't roll with a set
You only rockin' those bandanas to cover the hole in your neck
gotta love a throwback neckhole bar. smooth execution
Come to my town, I'll show u how legends blast w/ rounds dude
U can try & make a Titanfall.. If u step in here I'll put metal all around you
little straightforward but i liked this
& no crew will save ya, them fuckbois scared to be outlinin in chalk
If you show up w/ Shooters behind ya, u just found out I wasn't trying to talk
didn't like the way you set this up but the concept was nice
U'd duck & run quick, u're what we call a gay man
Banksy ain't making art, but I will corner you to the wall & spray cans
didn't like this. starting to seem like the gunbars are overused here.
Break in ur place & rape ur slut, u'll hide while I bulldoze her
I got the mind of a Stark... I'll run in that Hodor & throw her body all over
aight. GoT cool.
But she BEEN fuckin me, I'll drive by ur crib & have it doused w/ sparks
Don't have to show vids of ur girl & me to have these Clips tear ur house apart
meh. simple. video/gun clips flip is overdone.
U an e-thug, soft as fuck but fronts bout the life like he know shit
Only time u got Blood on your hands, ur makin' gang signs for ur pro pic
this was straight
U know ur bars are trash, u've spit bad plenty
The namechange to Greed is fitting, u dropped Pryde 'cus u never had any
nice personal closer
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Originally Posted by Greed
The only bombs you drop are the N ones, i dont know whos fault it is this nerd breathes
But Knuck actually likes all the races.. Daytona, Indy.. Wacky 'n even the Kentucky Derby
i would have taken this in a diff direction. the punch isn't really a diss
Yo girl loves the D, n She take jizz loads 4 a fee
After i steal ur wifi password everyone of my niggas get on it for free
wife i pass word... dope concept, decent wording
I aint with that social media, dont have an instagram 'n wont start an account
That doesnt mean i wont DoubleTap ur chest until a heart'll come out
aight i guess. didnt setup the heart part tho
Crybaby ass bitch.... like des, but truly more so
This redhead WINEEEEEEEEEEEE..... UB40
no sir
I really be jumping off them top ropes, i cannot fake it
But that 380 bar was the Sho stopper + ur HeartBreak, Kid
i would have dropped the reference to 380 and added better wrestling tie ins
Thought jews were frugal. Ur whole religions been doubted
How u spend hella time on that verse but none of them discounted?
discounted is forced here. liked the concept tho.
Getting loud in the chat n shit..something like hoes do
But this gingersnaps on me one more time and he gon crumble like those do
need diff wording to make this a strong diss. make it clear you made him crumble.
That star wars line was awful bruh, how you figure you aint missed it?
I never believed a line about Hanukkah be terrible, but THAT was like not having a Christmas
forced wp. the concept is there but this bar doesn't pull it off
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Cool battle gents. Knuck I feel like youre over doing the gun bars a little bit. If all you're basically saying is "I'm going to shoot you", you probably don't need to repeat it in half your bars. You had some creative ones so I can't knock you too much, but just something to keep in mind, cause they get old. I liked opener, Titanfall, Hodor, blood on hands, and pryde.
Greed, wifi password was line of the battle to me and you had some nice concepts through out, but some of them fell flat on forced wording (discounted, closer). Should tweak the bars until you get them smooth or just drop it from your verse, because in these tight battles, those misses will keep you from winning.
Knuck takes this on better execution over all. Greed didnt have much other than Wifi, and Knuck dropped a solid verse with few misses.
Vote: Knucklehead