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Originally Posted by Artificial
I kill with txt, ur raps r wack.
My blade been 'sharpened' for the purpose of doing exactly that.
Sharp end. Cool. Simple but I like it. You completed wasted your setup tho. It's not necessary with a solid punch but it will upgrade a decent punch to dope.
Call for back up n it'll be the last time.
When ur fgt friends arrive in their vw golf to play ur back, 9.
Lot of connections packed in there but still comes off light to me. Still comes off a little forced but not bad
German fgt. No way I would've lost to ya.
Leave this Nazis jaw sitting crooked like a swastika.
Too simple.
Im accosting ya. U shook n might fall
U ain't gotta ratchet that's just what girls say u be lookn like dog
ill pass on this one also
Ya body dissolved in liquid to hide the crime
I got that revolver spittn, put the six to nine like the zodiac sign.
meh because its not setup up. could have been better with any cancer reference.
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Originally Posted by Sharp
Try to test Sharp n what happens ain't my fault
The Fallout 4 fuckin with me'll put whatever's left of ya in a vault
aight. little obscure but not bad
Brains'll get mashed to shit. There's no doubt bitch
You'll have my Rage movin thru your skull like that Inside Out flick
like the concept but the hit is a little light to me
just quit, its obvious that text just ain't your talent
We'd know you're not capable of thought even without todays Veritas' challenge
cool current events, but worded very straightforward
n ya girl wants to marry me, can't imagine nuthin that's worse
I oughtta cut that Hozier off for thinkin she could Take me to Church
this would have been dope if you set up the ear part
Brought tools for blood. You're gettin cut n this is your notice
You can battle the Scyth'er run away on some pokemon safari zone shit
haha at the pokebars. not a hard hit but cool
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My dude Art is nice with the concepts. If you had a better grasp of effective wording you would be hard to beat. Use your setups to give your punch more impact instead of just throwing in filler that rhymes with the punch. If you don't its really a wasted line, and you'll lose to people with better wording.
Sharp is sharp. Nothing too heavy as far as the disses, but didn't really have any bad misses. I would like to see some harsher wording. Be mean. It's just a text battle, nobodies feelings should get too hurt over this shit.
Cool battle, but I gotta go with Sharp for the more effective verse overall. Concepts are only part of the battle and they don't mean shit unless you word them to hit. As soon as Art gets that, he's gonna be tough to beat.
Vote: Sharp