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Old 06-28-2015, 01:52 PM   #11
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Originally Posted by Bust View Post
He ain't holding Guap, smoking rocks got his bank flattened,
On some beginner shit, it's why ur cash flow like broken blocks dawg.. it ain't stackin,
ok concept. a little wordy but ok
N when he see my doe he wanna be my bro, droolin over half a stack
But I told u 6000 times when I rip out ya spine..I'll have ya back
little simple for me. would have like a better setup
Quit the faggit act, I'll pull a knife but first spit till snot hits this dudes cheek
Then put the blade in ya mouth as phlegm makes its way out...that's hawk in a loogie
this was cool
I'm poppin a toolie, got glocks n them uzis what u thought this a movie?
CRIMES REAL! n I know u stay cooped up in ya room but damn, chickens see alot mo than you, b
this hits
U the only homo lurking, so either drop or log off, that phony pose don't work, g
Talk tough n my click'll surround ur upper body wit 9's like a Tony Romo jersey
ok but light to me. didn't like 'upper body with 9s' wording
My hommies show no mercy, n u might trade shots but with aim off ur nothin, fam
See u can buck cans, but when ur targets missed shouldn't ur focus be ur Fuckin cants'
didn't like this
I trust u to show, wait, hed rather have a popular opponent then get it on wit bust,
Hey @Sharp since he's lookin for a big name, I think iamrhetoric is long enuff
i get it but iamrhetoric isn't a big name on NC, so this falls a little flat
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Originally Posted by Trag. View Post
mom wished u were a titty fuck, a stream rollin down her neck
u never measured up in life...the only GOOD bust belongs around her chest
cool concept, but could have been directed better
ill flip that line again, n have the ruger getchya slumped wit ease
the gun buxom bitches - other words stretch bust like some big double d's
cool concept, but wording in punch is off
watch me make a prediction how the leagues in for the worse...
cause we all caught a glimpse of the wk 14, just from skimming that verse
eh. i guess. light tho.
ya name inspires nothin but doubt, too crazy for fuckin around
voters yell "Trag wins", even muff had a bad taste with a nut bust in his mouth
i think you messed up the execution here, but the concept is straight
seen what this fgt writes? ya have the baddest wife, i cant deny
she came over to borrow my sugar, daddy - n b4 I left she gave my saccharide
concept is fire but you messed up the direction. you should have been borrowing sugar if she's giving saccharide
set fire to his squad, wont have anyone left to carry ya casket
I'll dustbust... then have what's left of ya homies vacuum up the ashes
nice
just shut it down. pump off tha holster, left slumped on ya sofa
after i dump tre's its all vegetables in a bag....so you KNOW the parties over
nah
Cool battle. Bust surprised me here with some nice quotes. Liked blocks, hawking a loogie, and cooped up. Trag had dope concepts for the most part but didn't always have wording to match. His best bars were double Ds, saccharide, and dustbust.

This was a cool battle but I feel like Bust had worse misses and Trag had better concepts in general. Looking forward to reading more from both of you.

Vote: Trag.
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