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Originally Posted by IAmRhetoric

We really waiting, is this dude alpha yet?
A be seein D's without a firm grasp of the alphabet..
i liked the abcd concept, but you didn't do anything to shape an effective punch. if you want to make this hit, use your setup better and tie into the punch
I don't think I'm alone here, what you drop is lackluster
Drop wack n we'll see he pasta way because I fed him w/ shells like an italian grandmother..
'pasta way' is cool, but this doesnt really count as wordplay b/c the flip only works one way. use your wording to give 'pasta way' a second meaning
Hold up yur hands buster, i got fists of timber that'll leave you injured
Break ya knees to splinters, have ya ribs seeping inward, this one right'll keep you hindered
simple word associations. if you go this route use more tie ins. timber/splinters is boring. stretch your vocab and make more connections
I'm the winner you fuck, and you're a beginner you chump,
The only metal you have is the one you got at the Dinner for Schmucks
liked the flow on this but the punch is meh
I'll always keep the heater tucked, you need to bend for yours
My crew like the Navy Seals saying "Objective Alpha has been secured"
stretched rhymes and not an effective punch
Every word from the crowd is "damn" like I was payin for an adlibber
Act your age or I'll have kids so young they don't have hair pulling hairtriggers
didnt set this up well enough to do anything
Damn nigga! My sick bars will educate you in the chemicals
You getting worse and worse every day like the racism in America
relevant to recent discussions but not really a punch

Originally Posted by Alpo the Alpha

shouts to Sharp, I sure needed this handicap match
you wanna be down? I'll leave you there permanently, and I aint tryna bring that Brandy track back
i get it but didn't like the wording. too wordy for a light punch
I heard you're like..... trying text again on some 2nd childhood shit
yah style doesn't turn heads, even Linda Blair would yawn at u while you spit
a bit obscure w/ the poltergeist reference. and wording is off
yah audio is wack, you'll never make it to the album shops
and you're only known for lying on tracks, like Malcom's pops
another obscure reference. you typically want to stick with stuff the avg person in your audience knows about, unless its super dope. this wasn't really
fuck your pro tool sessions
war is what I have in store and I'll give you the beats in your local produce section
better wording. this is ok i guess. use the setup to make it hit harder
the hawk will leave you bleeding out, the hands? a similar fate
you were a loser yesterday, you'll be a loser tomorrow, what makes you think you'll be a winner today?
nah. not effective
I'll champ your moms anus, and have yah aunt tape it
you like irony?
my SUV's outside with a copy of L&O SVU season 1 in the rape kit
trying to be harsh but this doesn't make sense. why would you have dvds in a rape kit? why would you have rape kit? need to set this up better
your words rhyme but they lack substance, substantially
I'm a rapper that'll put you in a duffle bag for a ransom fee, then charge a Ransom Fee
Nah.

Rhetoric came with a pretty light verse but had a few bars that showed potential, but no solid hits. Alpo had some misses, but beet's was ok to me. Alpo seemed to have an idea of what he was doing but his wording is hurting his concepts. Still decent battle, props to both.

Vote: Alpo the Alpha