You made it here by no luck. Hush set ya up to get punk'd now you queer.
way to go... read below, it's the suggested route to send you the fuck outta here.
^uhm. maybe missing smth? idk.
I bet you saw my name & puked. Ima see yours like Ha, what a corny fruit...
My name ring out in my city nigga. When urs sounds its wit harmonicas & joyful flute
^okay. execution is nice. concept kinda simple
U dont shoot outside of ranges on ur birthday. One punch'd put a crack in ur face
& only time 'lead out'? is after I drop u wit that jab & ur girl takin me back to her place
^why birthday? lead connects to shooting as led, but to jabs as lead. idk
Fuck cares who ball in the tourney farther when ur chicks such a slutty partner
I pick baby girl up right now... she'd take the mic in front of erryone like Curry daughter
^oookay. had to do some research and i get it now. good line
I fight the best - aim for the jaw and give this fool one right & left
And it'll be an early breaking that'd only be acceptable on license tests
^had to some googling again tbh, but this is a solid line
When u play life like chess you win early - now I could get rich wit past dues
...only moves u been makin is a rotation between your bed fridge & bathroom
^aite
last 3 were pretty good
vs.
When it comes to text, put a stop to it cuz ya not legit
You come w/ such Horrible Scripts, it could make Jurassic World into an Oscar flick
^i kinda have to like this line cuz i been going on about the movie's awful script lol. decent line
This wannabe homie sucks, to beat me you better pony up
My Style is dope. You've struggled to come into your own like a lonely Muff
^lol okay
I'll kill you quick - Put you in a Grave for not actin right
& once you Meet the Dirt, it'll be you'n that Bitch Forever like Married Life
^okay
I'll Vent my anger & trust ya life'll end, bet it square
When part of you Circulates evenly in every room like Central Air
^okay
He talks a lot til the heater's aimed & he'll start chokin instantly
'N when the gun go off? That's Chamber Music that could rival Beethoven's symphonies
^aite
I'm not Often Around, my schedule's a tangled maze
But I'll show Availability when I use one to cover ya mangled face
^ehh okay.
very solid consistent verse
this was a good read. i think jun had better standouts w/ his last three, but tic wasn't far behind in that regard, but he was more consistent. all of his minus his closer were at least decent. so yea, i think i gotta give it to tic. props to both tho, cool battle.
v/tic
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