[Geno]

Horror core.
Your vocals are way low man. Turnbthe beat level down a big or turn your vocal levels up. Either that or back off on the vocals compression until the beat isnt drownibg your voice out..

Maybe try a combination og those thibgs until you sound more clear. But as for what your sayi g.. nahh. I can dig that kind of shit once in a while. But its just annoying to me anymore. Mainly the reason i dont listen to necro anymore lol. Kinda sounded lime hat content wise imo.

The beat is nice.. and if you fix sou d levels it might actually sound more like your getting at the beat better. But as is this just sounds meh.
like phill said.. you got the basics. Try writing some subject matter that is relateable and draws people to want to listen. Tbh.. this just makes me and probably most people want to turn it off.

Keep recording man. Not entirely a waste!