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El Muffin · 06-27-2015, 01:36 AM

@Dre can discount this if he wants

^^I made this comment before reading either verse

Dre. Opener. This np has ss to be played. But I think u toed it in pretty well. It's a little off on the syllables to me but that's prolly just the way I'm reading it. I like this.
Chamber maid was hilarious. That setup is super corny lol pow pow click clack boom pow lol but the punch was dumbfumn. I did the housekeeping voice n everything
Hit grades. Is an odd phrase. I saw where u were going but hit grades is something I never heard of
shooting/dope veins is played. I'm sure u know that.
Closer ok but leaning towards played again but dont get a discredit fir that. It's just an ok line this time

Strikta

Makers mark is eh. Pretty fresh but it's just came off a little underwhelming. Red stuff comin down ya Neck ehh I get it but don't like it tbh
pulled out ur ass. Ok
chute was kinda slick. Wording a Lil on the ruff side but cool
nut on ya chick. Roll around her fingers? Lmao this nigga on sum dinoysus orgy shit I knew it. He be telling hoes to play w/ his nut. Made me lol but mire wtf than anything lol
closer was wack to me tho. Not creative. The thought of I'm paling sum1 on skyscrapers is stupid.

Hmm

Close. Strikta had more okay bars but Dr's standouts were better worded n more creative to me honestly

I have his opener (which I've seen on strike but the tie ins n word association were executed magnificently) n housekeeping

Vs chute n nut on fingers lol

I got Dre in a VERY CLOSE ONE

I VOTE FAIR DON'T GET MAD AT ME U BOTH

V/DRE

06-27-2015, 01:36 AM	#8
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	@Dre can discount this if he wants ^^I made this comment before reading either verse Dre. Opener. This np has ss to be played. But I think u toed it in pretty well. It's a little off on the syllables to me but that's prolly just the way I'm reading it. I like this. Chamber maid was hilarious. That setup is super corny lol pow pow click clack boom pow lol but the punch was dumbfumn. I did the housekeeping voice n everything Hit grades. Is an odd phrase. I saw where u were going but hit grades is something I never heard of shooting/dope veins is played. I'm sure u know that. Closer ok but leaning towards played again but dont get a discredit fir that. It's just an ok line this time Strikta Makers mark is eh. Pretty fresh but it's just came off a little underwhelming. Red stuff comin down ya Neck ehh I get it but don't like it tbh pulled out ur ass. Ok chute was kinda slick. Wording a Lil on the ruff side but cool nut on ya chick. Roll around her fingers? Lmao this nigga on sum dinoysus orgy shit I knew it. He be telling hoes to play w/ his nut. Made me lol but mire wtf than anything lol closer was wack to me tho. Not creative. The thought of I'm paling sum1 on skyscrapers is stupid. Hmm Close. Strikta had more okay bars but Dr's standouts were better worded n more creative to me honestly I have his opener (which I've seen on strike but the tie ins n word association were executed magnificently) n housekeeping Vs chute n nut on fingers lol I got Dre in a VERY CLOSE ONE I VOTE FAIR DON'T GET MAD AT ME U BOTH V/DRE __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople Last edited by El Muffin; 06-27-2015 at 01:41 AM.