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Old 06-26-2015, 07:22 PM   #22
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Originally Posted by Ullr View Post
admittedly a little bummed to have lost when the verse which I was facing was questionable in terms of topic consistency but no worries, I'm not mad or upset just disappointed in that respect - not knocking the verse at all which he presented because it was seriously very good but it was loosely at best following the topic picture. There was a mask but the second part of the prompt was more or less ignored at least by my reading.

Either way, solid battle and a pleasure as expected. Congratulations and best of luck in the remainder of the tourney!
Isn't being abstract about taking your topic and making it your own though?
My verse last week was about a young girl that reached her ripeness while Pent used pie associated similies about taking her out the oven
...,,,or something like that, I'm the one disappointed by Pents performance I even got us the ext.
I'm sure he would have won but at least my verse would have had more to work against
*sigh*
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