We really waiting, is this dude alpha yet?
A be seein D's without a firm grasp of the alphabet..
wack set up... punch isn't real complex but not bad
I'm the winner you fuck, and you're a beginner you chump,
The only metal you have is the one you got at the Dinner for Schmucks
this was solid... Metal wordplay old but I liked the reference
Every word from the crowd is "damn" like I was payin for an adlibber
Act your age or I'll have kids so young they don't have hair pulling hairtriggers
cool idea, coulda been nice if you worded it differently
vs.
yah audio is wack, you'll never make it to the album shops
and you're only known for lying on tracks, like Malcom's pops
unique reference here but coulda been done better... ok
I'll champ your moms anus, and have yah aunt tape it
you like irony?
my SUV's outside with a copy of L&O SVU season 1 in the rape kit
haha aight... wordy & not the best concept but set up / punch kinda humorous
Wanted to pick some I liked but to be honest there were a lotta misses here fellas...
Hinder & closer were the main ones I wasn't feelin from IAR.
Beats & loser loser from Chyeaa were his weakest...
the ones I quoted above were best, and overall Rhetoric just brought more creative ideas
That plus dinner for shmucks was enough to take it in my opinion
V/IAR
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