Quit the faggit act, I'll pull a knife but first spit till snot hits this dudes cheek
Then put the blade in ya mouth as phlegm makes its way out...that's hawk in a loogie
vs.
mom wished u were a titty fuck, a stream rollin down her neck
u never measured up in life...the only GOOD bust belongs around her chest
watch me make a prediction how the leagues in for the worse...
cause we all caught a glimpse of the wk 14, just from skimming that verse
seen what this fgt writes? ya have the baddest wife, i cant deny
she came over to borrow my sugar, daddy - n b4 I left she gave my saccharide
These were all solid to me... Hawk in a loogie was a little off conceptually but decent.
Good bust kinda predictable, still cool. Week 14 kinda old but not bad & saccharide I liked.
Bust had some bars too that I thought needed work on concepts - blocks, spine, closer...
Trag didn't connect on everything but overall the ideas & wording were more polished.
V/ Tragic
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