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sral · 06-26-2015, 07:52 AM

lmao at deadman

this was pretty slick for what it was

loved the molotov and quartezrly's lines either end of the verse

i feel like you've found "your" style and this works for you

good to see you get in that groove of writing regularly too

keep than pen moving J!

06-26-2015, 07:52 AM	#3
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