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Old 06-26-2015, 01:54 AM   #4
El Muffin
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I'll Nika
opene is slick ly worded but kinda cheesy. Kiss the bump in the rankings gbye n end up being diagnosed w/ herpes lol just kinda weird. Conceptually it's cool. Just personally don't dig the association
life was dope af tho. N the ur martin tie in was unneccesary but fucking hilarious. That's a nice extra tidbit u added there. Impressive
fraze/concept was slick. Again. Really simple but reaaaaly effective
handle w/ care is fresh. I see u stepped ur creativity up. Ur whole line was an entendre. U don't normally do this
sweat. Vintage nika. This was nasty
green/night vision lol fresh
fraze logic sucks tho to me
closer was eh too

damn. U were merkin shit then last 4 was wtf eh but still. Nice verse.

Fraze
I like the opener. Clean
I'll nika. you drop weak as catching his disease is just a bad phrase. I see the I'll nigga wp but that's kinda wack tbh
rust was creative. Execution was unique but a little long-winded abv avg
j hens lol that was old school but funny
Sharon stones was ok
dodging muff is relevant but kinda simplistic. Tb fair he didn't duck me. Just realized I wasn't being an asshole n retracted. But I would take advantage of the concept too I digress. Its a Lil on simple side
don't like teen habit
closer eh too

nice verse from u too

Both of u guys' last 4 were eh tho. So comparing the rest? I'll have to give it to nika. Just looking at my breakdown

He had creativity n harshness

Fraze cane nice too but just a Lil bit less memorable yknow

Close but


V/Nika


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