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Old 04-22-2013, 03:58 PM   #8
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I don't think this needs much of a breakdown just like the other two votes, I'll go quick.

Walt: Funny references to the show, kissing jrs ass/quick end to the series, etc. made your verse work very well.
Tony: Idk. You really had allot to work with here and didn't utilize it imo. Kind of a let down considering Tony's the man.

Overall it's Walt.
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