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El Muffin · 06-25-2015, 07:16 AM

Bust
opener. Simplistic but ok I guess. A money punch. Eh
I'll have ya back really played bro
hawk n a loogie was a cool visual. Not hard but sum Kool horror core shit. #Larkin
coop good flow. Prolly be good live. It's ok as I'm reading it
Tony romo. Don't like lines like this. Could use anyone who wears #9
Not feeling cants. Think I missed sumthin
closer was kinda weird. I dint get wat they had to do w/ it other than long name.

Iono bust I've seen u come better. Interesting verse but I think u dropped the ball w/ the back line and closer

Trag
open ok
buxom ..cool wp. Big ass boobies kinda cheesy but concept is nice
lol at bust in my mouth. Yall never gon let me live huh
sack a ride was cool too
nm follow soot was eh. The dust trail shit was ehhhh. I thought u were goin in another direction
closer was eh

Pretty good. Picked up steam in the middle

I got Trag here by lookin at my breakdown

Cool shit fellas

V/trag

Wait did u edit that bust line

Coz now it look gay wtf? Lmaaaao

Why is nut in there

Now u mk my vote look gay it's a subtle change.

06-25-2015, 07:16 AM	#6
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	Bust opener. Simplistic but ok I guess. A money punch. Eh I'll have ya back really played bro hawk n a loogie was a cool visual. Not hard but sum Kool horror core shit. #Larkin coop good flow. Prolly be good live. It's ok as I'm reading it Tony romo. Don't like lines like this. Could use anyone who wears #9 Not feeling cants. Think I missed sumthin closer was kinda weird. I dint get wat they had to do w/ it other than long name. Iono bust I've seen u come better. Interesting verse but I think u dropped the ball w/ the back line and closer Trag open ok buxom ..cool wp. Big ass boobies kinda cheesy but concept is nice lol at bust in my mouth. Yall never gon let me live huh sack a ride was cool too nm follow soot was eh. The dust trail shit was ehhhh. I thought u were goin in another direction closer was eh Pretty good. Picked up steam in the middle I got Trag here by lookin at my breakdown Cool shit fellas V/trag Wait did u edit that bust line Coz now it look gay wtf? Lmaaaao Why is nut in there Now u mk my vote look gay it's a subtle change. __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople Last edited by El Muffin; 06-25-2015 at 11:05 AM.