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Old 06-23-2015, 02:52 AM   #3
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Muff you had some pretty cool lines, I lol'd at the Dyson ball line
that go to war line was pretty memorable as well
I actually lol'd at the Maculay Culkin line. I thought that worked well

Des had a pretty dope opener which worked pretty well to me
I had to slow down on my reading to get that Hozier line and I was like ohhhhhh
I thought that closer was pretty slick too...


v/ehhh I think I'm going to go have to go with Des due to the open & closer
I felt Muff had some slick lines the tower of terror line was kind of a stretch for me
and that Adder closer would have been dope had it been worded differently
dope battle guys
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