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Old 06-23-2015, 02:12 AM   #2
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Allen Knight came with some pretty slick lines..

ur a faggot that loves cock, i fuckin hate this joke
u sucked Tumenov & let'em take u from the back like a rear naked choke
i stay blowin out ppl in battles..TKO, in text ima great
u neva been Upton of votes, u get smashed everytime u step to the plate

this little section was cool, had to figure out that Tumenov line
but I thought that little switch up to the next section was cool
I enjoyed the Witcher line too, that was pretty smooth
and I thought that closing Mad Max line was pretty dope too, nice work breh

Cred...his name is Wile E Coyote for a reason you get a neg for that
the Jaguar line was cool but that Taurus line seemed like a stretch
the forehead/more dead section seemed more filler ish to me..
but that closer

U ain't bred right, I bang my gang wen I'm grippin da lead tight
Cuz I'll start clickin dat Eagle wit my Flag wrapped around it like I'm refreshin da website
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that was pretty slick, but I got Allen Knight taking it with more quotables
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