[fraze]

Originally Posted by IAmRhetoric

When I'm shooting, rare that my pistol misses..
Get this, my shots goin' straight to ya top like a hit of guiness.
This is boring, being honest. Its been done before so need to flip it more creative
Rapping isn't for you, pick a new career Greed,
Cuz tonight i'm catching a body like a high school cheer team..
Also played. Need more creativity.
Don't go soft Greedy, hold ya' toaster,
Fuck w/ me and arms goin up in the air like a roller coaster
This isn't worded harsh and is played
I am the lone beholder, I hold the people's chain..
Touch the belt n the hawks coming out no eagles game..
Simple word association, no real flip here
Call my bullets muscle relaxers, and when I see'em?
He gettin the full body puncture w/o paying for spa treatment..
Not feeling this.
You kid? you're none the wiser,
Cuz you're getting killed for being Greedy... like Mekhi Phifer*
this was cool, but reference is obscure
Agreeing to battle me? there's a price to pay
Fitting kid's name is ___, all I have to do is check mark to sign his life away
liked the concept but you didn't flip it well enough to hit
y

Originally Posted by Greed

I read that long ass verse last week, terrible, seemed like voters felt the same way
..FUCK the parable lines you had, THAT was just a horrible misuse of nameplay
aight
Ill litterally embarrass u, come here so i can smack that nerd face
Stupid nigga, u'd have a para... dimes shift to lesbian with that wack ass wordplay
this is ok
Allen knight changed my name back to greed, and 4 that im gonna to make him pay
.. Dont change the fact ur blank expressions leaves voters with the same look anyways
not harsh but ok.
Im real estate and you burger king, you can feel the hate in the murder scene
The only thing you'd reel estate of an emergency after i'd give the burner a squeeze
nope
I stay losing battles. I laugh cause i know im the best in
See itd be funny if i ask why no one liked me.. thats a rhetorical question
cool concept but didn't set it up well
I have no chill.. i aint with that birdwatching or sit patient
.. When Iam under control im curbstomping this kids face in
nah
I dont wanna hear that 'i really be out here' all loud like u got the method
Bitch the Only thing u turn up is the TV to drown the sound of your own depression
meh

Rheteric was cool but a lot of the bars were played so it doesn't end up being as strong of a verse as it could have been. Greed had a few misses but easily had the better verse.

Vote: Greed