[King Karaoke]

Hi...


His fam sad cus they got a wack text battling son...
I especially feel bad for maxima..cause i just run her over with one.
I'm bout to get violent. U had to poke the thug.
I run thru Maxipad..and leave the whole thing soaked in blood.

I liked where u were going with the nameplays but I felt that they were somewhat forced...
even the ones I quoted...
with that being said your verse wasnt bad...
The maxipad line was worded/executed very well...

I'll fire rockets into your dome, u're shook and u're feeble
Da way I'll leave Missals in that Temple it's like prayerbooks in cathedrals
You don't write dope lyrics, this pussy is so timid
They say Art imitates Life.. Well, that's cos they're both bitches

That Art imitates life line was dope...
Im not sure if youre rusty but a couple of your lines were a little played or just simple...

I think Max was a little more consistent...
Snoop line couldve been quoted...

vote- Max...

Bye...