[fraze]

Originally Posted by Alpo the Alpha

Gotta admit I was offended, obviously my lines went over your head
Then I saw your pic, and you literally have lines going over your head
i get where you're going but too simple. and this isn't a hard punch
Old age came for you a tad bit early , it’s a wrap and it’s over
This muthafucka goes to the barbershop…… and asks for the Homer
funny, but a little straightforward. light jab.
I’m dying my nigga, to type this, was almost too weak to do it
I’d take your wig off, but your hair follicles beat me to it
better punch but wording is bad.
This bald fucker never gets the hints, and still asks chicks to date
Bitches be like, “no thank’s Wanderer, but that’s awful nice of you..toupe”
played but still funny.
Nice record Mr. No show, now I’ll serve this peon right
This here’s the end of Wand, cause I’mma put you in the ER twice
no thanks
cruised right into this beatin’ like you typed me into your Tom Tom
So kiss the ring, or get back handed back to your corner, cuz I’m the Don, Wan
didn't set this up well enough to hit
you’re losing by a hair , coming in dead last
When I retire, they’ll hang my jersey, when you retire, they’ll hang Lebron’s head band
ok concept but isn't directed or harsh. sloppy slant rhyme also takes away from the effect
This lesson was brief, stepping to me is just accepting defeat
I beat a dead horse this whole verse, you’ll beat a horse to death for it’s weave
ok.. see what you were doing but i would have switched out a few off the hair lines anyway b/c it gets redundant after a while. the whole verse doesn't need to be the same for this to work, a few references would have been fine with good setup. you hampered your verse to pull off a mediocre punch.

Originally Posted by Wanderer

Dudes bad with words. Don't put money on that type of shit
only time we'd place an Alphabet is on the improbability of him reciting it
okay wp, bad wording in punch
Obvs you were an accidental birth who grew up spoutin' crap
all ya wack writtens pass straight Bias & even your own mother ain't vote outta that
didnt like this
Closet faggot. Cuddling up with your boyfriend after another date
way you half naked with that fruit on ya chest would be enough to make Jilti look straight
nah.
Broke & useless. unemployment means you ain't building up stacks
I'll hack you to pieces. Trust it won't be another job lost when I Give you the Axe
too straightforward.
Seriously homie when've you ever bankrolled tons?
don't know if you've got the time to speaker you're too busy selling stolen ones
little bit wordy but cool punch
Goons hunting you down, good luck. can't even hide you're fucked
but it'll be easy for you to Lylo when you're given enough Air to blow one up
ok concept, light punch
dude loves his girls bed head look tho I bet she's got a nasty snatch
All that Frisbie. & yet it's only std's being thrown around to catch
a little forced, could have been set up better. still ok
Type to make me wanna grab the knife. Put you in a hearse, I'll lose it.
no ones gonna save your life & you certainly can't write a verse to do it.
this was cool.

Alpo had a few cool lines but he over did it with the hair. If you're gonna do a bars about the same thing more than once they have to be dope enough to keep people's attention. Alot of the bars were weak disses, and though a few were funny, that's not enough to win a battle.

With Wanderer, I liked speaker and his closer. Had some missteps, but more from being too simple with concepts, or slight misses on wording. Did enough to pull out a win.

Vote: Wanderer