this was pretty good, im not a topical head but goin off the topic both were really good.
ullr
hey'd moan and plead but didn't know he'd seen -
a whole life passing in a moment's leave for when he lowers the screen
produced is a glowing beam, a golden stream that pierces souls with ease
and if the soul is clean its light is shone indeed, a pure reflection of their hopes and dreams.
that was dopee.
but Cut shit....
Theres an urgent stabbing strike
and his rival lays disposed of, having first been paralysed.
No ones heard the hallowed cry as Grimwauld leads him away
to serve his appetite, as he hadn't eaten in days.
He feasts on the late victim and flesh drips from his jowls
leaving the taste of ironised blood thick in his mouth.
It was kill or be found, and if he thought he might die,
he'd do everything in his power to ensure he survived.
Grimwauld was a wily veteran of sorts
and bearing caution in mind had been what kept him from deaths jaws.
He was a remnant of the wars.
This didn't feel like a victory though
as while his many friends had fallen, he still considered this home.
He picked up his old resolve, embarking with deft side steps,
before he quickened his soldier march to a left, right, left.
With his chest tight-pressed up against the pallid wall
his omniscient eyes met with the safe haven that he sought.
He had made it to the forlorn encampment he had seen
with cobwebs draped from the bulwarks, it was scattered with debris.
Grinwauld scanned the vast retreat for all he could use
before he ambled to retrieve what he thought was a morsel of food.
that was sick
i think lars overall had the better written verse, he killed it tbh
V/Lars, but ullr wasnt bad at all
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