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Originally Posted by Artificial
U ugly af. Imma surgeon with the blade, friend...
Take a knife to Maximize..the effect of never seeing ur face again.
a little forced. this approach/wording doesn't make the wp hit
His fam sad cus they got a wack text battling son...
I especially feel bad for maxima..cause i just run her over with one.
this is ok. stretch on the np, but not horrible.
I'm bout to get violent. U had to poke the thug.
I run thru Maxipad..and leave the whole thing soaked in blood.
this is cool other than basically saying you use feminine hygiene products
Fuck with me? U must be a fear junky...
Ill have this bitch shitting himself more than Phil Dunphey.
meh
Ur a disgrace to netcees. If u look closely...
This wack faggots name is at the top of Lyrs OP.
should have thrown this one back
Shadow boxing? I'm heavy handed, got the right cocked...
Fight u in rain or snow..then leave u bleeding in it like the nights watch.
liked the closer. kind of a current events tie in, but you could have done a better job of reinforcing the connection in the setup
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Originally Posted by Maximus
I'll fire rockets into your dome, u're shook and u're feeble
Da way I'll leave Missals in that Temple it's like prayerbooks in cathedrals
this was not good. missals?
You don't write dope lyrics, this pussy is so timid
They say Art imitates Life.. Well, that's cos they're both bitches
i really liked this concept, would have been sick with a better setup, but still decent
Spurted semen on your girl's pubic hair, I left your boo raped
I came hard on that Bush like Snoop spitting ill on his new tape
ok but simple
U aint a smart dude, u're the wackest dork
So fuck robots, only link b/w Artificial & Intelligence is this rat's report
bad wording killed this bar. rip.
Thug?? U've never been charged for beating folks, u're corny as hell
If u got a case of Assault & Battery, it's a packet of sodium chloride & cell
cool concept, but the execution is flawed. need to work on your word choice
Your concepts are old and u flip played lines, this herb's pathetic
Fuck the trash u Rote.. U're more repetitive than that learning method
light but an ok punch. probably played but whatev
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This is a close one to me. Both dudes came with some nice stuff, but I would guess they're both shaking off rust because they also both had bars that just weren't all the way there. Art really only had Maxipad, but maxima and nights watch were close. Maximus had Art imitates life and a few light but effective jabs, but had the worse miss with his opener. Art wasn't as complex with his concepts, but he didn't have any horrible misses either, just nothing that hit super hard. I think Maximus just edges it with the consistency of the rest of his verse, but the bad opening makes it closer than it had to be.
Vote: Maximus