06-19-2015, 05:23 PM
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#5
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Senior Member
Join Date: Mar 2013
Location: Louisville, KY
Posts: 972
Battle Record: 14-24
Rep Power: 32898726
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Originally Posted by jilti
my mags firing pin recoil leave ur mom & dad murdered soon
on the ground chalked as rounds launch Offspring, just for giving birth to u
i feel like you need to word this differently to hit with impact. its not even a bad concept but not set up well
NAACP Dolezal type, cant decide if he's a black or white american
but if you keep going at this Rachel be Found Lying By Your Parents
nice current events bar
leave u paralyzed in an old person chair once the cal. drawn
so fuck if ur from Rockaway, when thats all you'll be able to do from now on
choppy wording in the punch but concept is cool
how come he's the Heavy favorite? maybe it's the six chins
but don't take it Personal Kare, just do that before diabetes kicks in
this is ok.
take a rigid weapon to a bitchs midsection, then force it thru
not Intuition opponents harm, but i have this horrible gut feeling urs will too
dope wp but i didnt like the punch at all
hide the body while i get all these votes, nigga you'll lose
so if Anyone Seeking Lead, it's only detectives looking for clues
weak punch
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Originally Posted by King Karaoke
You're overrated plus your simple ass style is far from complicated
You've been giving us that watery shit for so long, it makes Phil feel constipated
ok. nothing world changing but solid (no pun)
Seeing corny faggots like u and knucklehead talk guns, just rattles
Cuz where I'm from we go outside, not netcees when we wanna have gun battles
clever wit. liked this
I got a brand new revolver I've been waiting to aim at u, shit isn't a joke
The can got your name written on it like those limited editions of Coke
cool
And I've seen your pics, your hairline has one hell of a groove
Most barbers want u to stay still during a haircut, yours actually has to tell u to move
this made me LOL
Your gun cabinet's empty, we've never seen u at the shop picking up shells bro
The only time we say you're 'armed to the teeth' is when u try licking ur elbow
ill pass on this
Chicks never give u TLC, your face is the reason y the girls don't wanna call
That Left Eye's so dead, I don't know if it's about to Creep, Girl Talk or chase a Waterfall
this had me dying. nice closer
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Cool battle. Jilti had a couple really nice concepts but suffered on the wording in a few places. Kar was pretty simple / straightforward with the punches, but brought in the humour and made almost all of them connect. Jilti might have been able to beat half the league with this verse, but unfortunately that's not the half Karaoke belongs to. Gotta bring the A-game again the top tier.
Vote: Karaoke
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