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Old 06-19-2015, 07:47 AM   #3
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hell nah, i often check for brokenhal0's shit...

this one was way different in style than what were used to seeing from you

seemed more track related, to be recorded, than just straight text?

reason i say that is the use of lines line this:

Quote:
sluggin with the dozens but im dumpin with the somthings
wars won below amount to nothin for the munchkins
there's a LOT of similar sounding words used in that to give it a sense of implied rhythm and cadence, if you havent recorded this, i think you should

prob sounds a hundred times better on beat than it reads in text

keep that pen moving!
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