06-18-2015, 08:29 PM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Mar 2013
Location: Louisville, KY
Posts: 972
Battle Record: 14-24
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Originally Posted by Bust
I don't polish pistols, ain't nuttin sweet bout bustin heat,
I mean JESUS! pieces kill, n id rather use a shiny chain to choke this fuckin geek,
you're working really hard for not much effect b/c the setup doesn't really help your punch, which you need b/c the wordplay isn't very clever
Legend? Never, HOF'r? U musta blown guys dicks for that shit,
But idgaf what Nik names himself, to us he's goes by bitch or faggit,
this is cool, but very simple
U ain't clappin a Nina, in fact kid u'll crap if a gats in the scene, nerd
The temps 90 n he havin a heat stroke,see yo, hes uncomfortable blastin the heater.
would have worked better as an old man bar. this was meh.
This grown man shit, u could move that childsplay back to ya Vizio,
Cos it ain't a kids game when I say that I'm taggin ur shitty hoe
please don't do this again
She actually pretty tho, she just want a man that can finally get her cherry popped,
Forget about u, n not notice 13 pass by like its already 14 on military clocks
this is also pretty bad
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Originally Posted by ill nik-A
u can talk sneakers, age, even go as far as describin my dressin style
BUT this battle is like a car lease… u gonna pay for goin the extra mile
cool but doesn't hit hard
go address denial, this thread was made for me to fuck ya pride quick
they didn’t need to click to know this was a sonning… cuz nik/ Bust inside it
nice. and like the flow.
what I mean’s basically u don’t have a shot, concepts lack the props
ur creativity deserted u… & all u see’s tumbleweed blowin past ur thoughts
nice imagery. this is almost a topical lol
trust I’ll win! what makes u different from everyone I crushed right in?
u don’t get a pass… cuz my style’s money like Manziel u just a Bust like him
this is cool. manziel didn't do shit
my guns droppin thugs, dare ya to come in my crib & flaunt the snub
…If u invite anyone to bring it in… it’s cuz ur faggot ass wants a hug
i'll pass on the closer
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bust, you seem to have been around long enough to know the basics, but you're stalling out on the concepts and wording. need to hit harder. go for the kill. be meaner. pass up the simple concepts.
clearly a win for nik without trying very hard.
Vote: Ill nik-A
Last edited by fraze; 06-18-2015 at 08:30 PM.
Reason: Something messed up my post.
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